Welcome back. Now that you have seen me write the answer to practice question number two, we're now ready to break down my answer and to look at all the different components that make this a great answer. So let's go ahead and break it down. So here's our question number two. If you need to read this question prompt again, then you can simply pause the video and do so now. Here we have a mixed charts question.

So we have a table over here, and we have a bar graph over here. And what we have to do is we have to compare the data between these two different infographics. You'll notice that here, we have to not only compare the data, but we also have to describe the trend that is occurring over a period of time. In this case, our period of time is from the years 1994 To 1998. So let's go ahead and start by writing the introduction. So here, we've highlighted our question language in the red color.

So the text and the red color describes what our infographics are about. So what we need to do when writing the introduction is we have to paraphrase this question language in our own words. So let's go ahead and do that. We're going to do that by using synonyms, and by changing up the word order, so let's take a look at what we have. The given table compares the figures of a cross sectional study that investigated the reasons why 100,000 Uk residents traveled overseas from 1994 to 1998. Whereas the given bar chart demonstrates the countries they visited during this time.

Time. So let's take a look at how we've paraphrased our question language here. First, you'll notice that we've replaced first chart with the given table. we've replaced shows with compares, instead of saying results. We've said figures. Instead of saying survey, we've replaced it with cross sectional study.

Instead of saying people, we have written UK residents we've replaced abroad with overseas and we've eliminated the word period and simply stated our period which is from 1994 to 1998. Now for our second infographic, instead of saying second chart, we've said the given bar graph instead of shows we've written demonstrates, notice now we could also use the word compares, however, we We don't want to be repetitive. We want to use new words to show off our vocabulary. Now we've replaced destinations with the countries they've visited. And instead of saying over the same period, we've said during this time, so we've used a lot of different synonyms to rephrase this question language for our introduction. So that's all we need to write for our introduction.

Now, let's move on to breaking down our second paragraph, which is our overview. Now for the overview, you may recall that we have to look at the highest and the lowest data points in our infographic. So let's go ahead and do that. Here. You'll see that this is our lowest data point for our table. And this is our highest data point for our table.

Now, if we move down to our bar graph over here, you'll notice that the lowest data point that we have In this entire bar graph is actually this data point here, which is for North America. Now, this data point for North America seems to be exactly the same as our data point for the year 1995. So if you want, you can also include this as the lowest data point. Now for our highest data point, this is the highest data point and it belongs to Western Europe. So now that we have our highest and lowest data points in both our infographics, we're now ready to break down our overview. Now, I want to mention one more thing before I show you the paragraph.

I want you to note that in this example, I have only described the highest and the lowest data points without mentioning the starting and the ending data points. Okay. So I have not mentioned the starting and the ending. There are points for our graphs over here. So I have not mentioned the starting data point, which is the year 1994. And I've also not mentioned the ending data point, which is the year 1998.

So if you want, it's completely fine to talk about the highest and the lowest data points for 1994. And then you can talk about the highest and the lowest data points for 1998. And then you can talk about the highest and the lowest data points for 1994 here in our bar graph, and then talk about the most popular and the least popular destinations for travel in 1998. So you can do that if you want. However, I've decided to not do that, in order to save time. You see if I was to describe the highest and the lowest data points for 1994 1998 and then for our bar graph down here, I would have A total of eight data points, I would have two data points here, two data points here, two data points here and two data points here.

So eight data points is too many data points to describe in the short amount of time that you have on your iOS exam. So for that reason, instead of talking about the highest and the lowest data points at the beginning, and at the end of our graph, I simply decided to look at the highest data point and the lowest data point in the total number of visits. Then, I looked at the highest data point in our entire bar graph. And then I look at the lowest data point in our entire bar graph. So that just makes writing this essay much more easier, and much faster. Because now I only have to describe four data points.

So let's take a look at our overview paragraph. Now here's our overview in general The year 1998 had the largest volume of visits overseas, during which time Western Europe was the most popular destination. On the contrary, the lowest amount of traveling took place in 1995, during which time North America was the least popular choice among travelers. So here, we're saying that in the year 1998, we had the largest amount of visits overseas. And during this time, in the year 1998, Western Europe was the most popular destination. On the contrary, now we're making a comparison, or saying that the lowest amount of traveling took place in the year 1995, during which time, North America was the least popular choice among travelers.

So now that we've given some basic information about the data in our infographics Our overview is now complete. We're now ready to move on to the specific details. So when we're writing the specific detail paragraphs, you will remember that the first thing we do is we split our infographic into two halves. So the easiest way to do this in this example is to talk about the table in paragraph number three, and then we can talk about this bar graph in the fourth paragraph. So we're going to talk about our table in the third paragraph. So let's take a look at it.

Specifically, holidays were the most common reason for travel in the given period, which started at 50,246 visits in 1994, and reached a peak of 20,000 on 700 trips by 1998. holidays were followed by business trips, and visits to family and friends, which started at 3000 155 and 2689 trips respectively, in 1994, and gradually climbed to 3957 and 3181 trips respectively by 1998. Alright, so we've got a lot of different data points there. So let's break this down. So what we're saying here in our first sentence is that at the start of our table in the year 1994, holidays, were the most common reason for travel, which started at 15,246 trips in 1994. And they eventually reached a peak of 20,700 trips by the year 1998. So here, we're now providing numbers for our highest data point at the start of our graph.

And we're describing its trend over this four year period. By the And for years, meaning by the end of the year 1998, holidays had reached a peak of 20,700 trips. Now in our second sentence, we're saying that holidays were followed by business trips and visits to family and friends. So we're describing both of these reasons together. We're saying that holidays were followed by business trips, and business trips, were followed by visits to friends and relatives. And we're saying that the business trips started at 3155 trips in the year 1994, and gradually climbed to 3957 by 1998.

And visits to friends and relatives started at 2689 trips in 1994, and gradually climbed to 3181 trips by the year 1998 Now before I move on to our fourth paragraph, I want you to notice that in this paragraph, we've described every single reason for travel. Except for other reasons. We haven't talked about this reason. And I've done that because other reasons don't really seem all that important to me. So I decided to skip this part to save time. So now that I've described all the important data points in the first half of our infographic, we're now going to break down the second half of our infographic, which is our fourth paragraph that we have written for this bar graph down here.

Regarding destinations, Western Europe gradually rose from about 19,000 visits in 1994, to a little over 24,000 visits by 1998. On the other hand, North America and other regions were the least popular choices that had under fourth Thousand visits each year from 1994 to 1998. So here, we're opening our sentence by saying regarding destinations. So this is showing the reader that we're now talking about our next infographic, which has data about the destinations. So we're saying that Western Europe gradually rose from about 19,000 visits in 1994, to a little over 24,000 visits by 1998. On the other hand, we're making a comparison now, on the other hand, North America and other regions were the least popular choices for every single year starting in the year 1994, all the way up to the year 1998.

So we're saying that for every year from 1994 to 1998, North America and other areas had under 4000 And visits every single year. So in this sentence, instead of estimating the numbers individually for these destinations, I've simply made a general statement by saying that these areas had under 4000 visits each year from 1994 to 1998. So that's another way in which you can describe the data if you want to save time. On the other hand, if you want to go ahead and actually estimate these data points, then you can go ahead and do that as well. In this case, if you were to estimate the data point, it would probably be best to estimate the data points at the beginning of the graph and at the end of our graph. So now our fourth paragraph is also complete.

And with that, our entire task one essay for this practice question number two is finished. Now before I move on, I want you to take note of one more thing I want you to notice that here, we haven't capitalized our w in the word Western, even though Western is capitalized in our graph down here. So remember that just because something is capitalized in the label doesn't mean that you should capitalize it. When you're writing your essay. You should only capitalize the words that are proper nouns. For example, North America is a proper noun.

So for that reason, we have to capitalize North America. The last thing that I want you to note about our fourth paragraph is that I have not talked about every single data point. Okay, and I've done this to save time. I've only talked about the main trends. So main trends basically means talking about the highest data point, the lowest data point, the beginning of our graph, and the end of our graph. And if you see some other interesting changes, like feel you need to focus on, then go ahead and talk about that as well.

But make sure that you have the time and that you prioritize talking about the key information and talking about the main trends first. So now we're finished with breaking down the structure to our answer. And this is what our entire task one answer looks like. Here we have our four paragraphs. Here we have the introduction. Here's our overview.

Here's our third paragraph. And here's our fourth paragraph. In this introduction paragraph, we have to paraphrase the question language. In the overview paragraph, we have given some basic information about the highest and the lowest data points. Then, in the third paragraph, we have started to describe the key numeric details. We've described the number of trips that took place in the first half of our infographic and then in the fourth paragraph We have described the key numeric details for the second half of our infographic.

So with that our task one essay is now complete. Now, I want you to note that in this answer, we've used some softer words, such as about or a little over. And we've used these words to avoid overgeneralization. This means that in order to maintain accuracy, whenever you are estimating a number that you see on a graph or a chart, you have to use softer words, such as about around approximately nearly a little over on so on. The next thing I want you to notice about this answer is the paragraphing and the spacing. Now if you want, you can start new paragraphs by indenting your paragraphs meaning that you leave some space at the beginning of each paragraph before starting your sentence for a new paragraph.

Or you can simply leave some space between your paragraphs, as I've done over here. So now that you have a clear understanding of the structure of an answer to a task one essay, I now want to move on to breaking down the different ingredients in this answer. So we're going to start off by first talking about cohesive devices. So here in this answer, all the words and the phrases that are highlighted in the pink color are your cohesive devices. So here, we've used some words such as given, or this or that, to reference back to some information that we've already discussed in the past. We've also used some discourse markers, which are phrases that we use to start a new sentence.

So here we've used the phrase in general. Here we've used on the contrary to show comparison and so on next You'll also notice that we have some coordinating conjunctions, as well as subordinating conjunctions in our answer, which glue our ideas together. And finally, we also have relative pronouns, which also help to tie our sentences together and to add fluency to our answer. Before we move on, I suggest that you pause the video and take a good look at the different cohesive devices that we've used in our answer. We're now going to move on to our next ingredient, which is coordinating conjunctions. So coordinating conjunctions are words such as and, but, or yet, so and so on.

Usually, we use coordinating conjunctions to form compound sentences. However, in this answer, we haven't used these coordinating conjunctions to form compound sentences. However, I want you to to note that this kind of use of coordinating conjunctions in your answers looks very good to your examiner's. And you're going to score just as many points as if you were to write compound sentences. This is a great way to use coordinating conjunctions because they still connect long phrases together, and they help you to form complex structures in your writing. So definitely use such coordinating conjunctions even when you're not forming compound sentences.

Next, we have subordinating conjunctions. So here we only have one subordinating conjunction the word whereas, and we've used this word to form a complex sentence. So you may remember that a complex sentence is a sentence in which we have an independent clause and a dependent clause which are connected together with a subordinating conjunction. Our next ingredient are the regular If pronouns, here in the purple, we have our relative pronouns, you may remember that relative pronouns are words that we use for two purposes. The first purpose is to add extra information in your sentence. The second reason is if you want to clarify or modify the noun that you're talking about.

So here, we have what's called an essential relative pronoun. This is an essential relative pronoun, because it defines the noun that we're talking about. it modifies this noun, which is study cross sectional study. And here we have what's called a non essential relative clause. If you're not quite sure what these relative pronouns are, and how we use them, or if you simply forgotten, I suggest that you go back and watch the video in which I've discussed these relative pronouns in mind. More detail.

Now let's move on to our next ingredient. This time we're talking about voice. So we have two types of voices in the English language, we have the active voice and the passive voice. So everything here that is in the black ink is written in the active voice. And this little part over here that is highlighted in the brown color is the passive voice. So passive voice is when the verb does the subject, whereas in the active voice, the subject does the verb.

If you're not quite sure about how to use the different voices in your writing, I suggest you go back to the video in which have discussed the active and the passive voice in much more detail. Let's move on to our next ingredient. We're now looking at tenses. Most of our answer is written in the past tense. You'll know Is the past tense is highlighted in the blue color, and the present tense is highlighted in the green color. Now the reason why most of our answer is written in the past tense is because our data set is from the past, our data set is from the years 1994 to 1998.

So for that reason, we've described most of our data in the past tense. Now let's move on to our next ingredient. This time we're looking at collocations. So you may remember collocations are words and phrases that often appear together. They are essentially chunks of words that fit really well with each other. And for that reason, they're frequently used together with each other.

So let's take a look at some of our collocations here. Here we have the collocation given period, gradually climbed reached a peak all These are groups of words that are often used together with each other. For example, we don't really say get to a peak, that's very unnatural, we say reach a peak, or reached a peak. So such collocations are going to improve your score for the lexical resource category. Now, in this answer, you'll notice that some collocations are quite short, whereas other collocations are long strings of words that are put together. So we've done this simply because usually, when we construct sentences, it often happens that words in a sentence collocate with each other.

So for example, in this collocation, here, we have words that are collocating with each other. So one word collocates, with the next, the next collocates, with the one after it, and the one after it collocates with a word after it. So therefore, we end up Getting a long string of words that all collocate with each other. We discussed this when I broke down the answer for the practice question number one for you in a previous video, but let me break it down for you one more time. So here we're going to break down this string of collocation here. So, in this example, you'll see that we have the word given bar chart, given bar chart is a collocation.

Another collocation is chart demonstrates. Another collocation is demonstrates the countries another collocation is countries they visited. Another collocation is visited during this time. So you see what you end up getting when you put all of these different collocations together is a long string of words that all collocate with each other. And this is a great way to show the examiners that you know how to fit the different words together. To form the meaning that you want to convey.

Now, collocations is not something that you can learn by simply memorizing the words and phrases. This is not really a good way to learn collocations. The best way to learn collocations is to actually do a lot of reading. So I suggest that you pick up a book on a subject that you really enjoy, and read on that subject, so that you can naturally pick up words that often appear together. We're now going to move on to our final ingredient, which is vocabulary words. So here in the blue color, we have the new vocabulary words.

And here in the brown color, we have words that have already been used in the question language. So keep in mind that you're only going to score points for the vocabulary category by using new words. So I hope that you already know the meaning of all of these vocabulary words that we've used in answer here. If you don't, I suggest that you pause the video and look up the definitions of these words so that you know what they mean. And so that you can use them in your writing. So that brings us to the end of this video.

Congratulations on making it this far into the course. We're very close to finishing our course now, we only have one final video left in which I'm going to give you some final tips for your success.