For this video lesson, I'm going to take you through a critique of a piece submitted by a student. So you can see how the concepts for this class apply to something that's still in development. The piece we're going to look at in this video is one submitted by Yosh. And I was able to get him on the phone and have a conversation with him about his piece and how we might develop it further. So in this video, I'm going to cut back and forth between some comments that I'm going to make directly to you, the viewer, and also some excerpts from my conversation with Josh. So here's what this is going to look like.

I'm going to play my initial conversation with Josh, then we're going to listen to his piece. I'm going to provide some initial thoughts and observations based upon the concepts in this class. And then I'm going to play you a bunch of excerpts from when I was working with Josh on how he could develop this further. And finally, I'm going to play you some excerpts from our conversation where I shared some final thoughts with Yosh